The first installment of TECHNATE 2051
My dad introduced this to me, and it's really interesting so far. I love how you start out in the perspective of a grandfather, especially because it's not common. And the concept of the "Skin" is captivating by itself!
Epic! That skin is freaky, for sure. For a moment, I thought Shen's capitulation from defiance to acceptance of her grandfather's desire (to not go to the megacity) was far too sudden - but of course the capitulation was an illusion. That was cool.
This was a great read. I particularly enjoyed the world design (“feral-hunter” is a pretty neat invention) and the complex interpersonal drama. Great job, I’m excited to see what comes next!